from what i can see, both diodes point to the same direction. If this is true, then this is the problem. Doublecheck the diodes, this is the most common mistake that people do with this circuit.
The mosfet is very had to kill unless you wire it wrong.
I suggest you (always) prototype your circuits on breadboard, this way you cave the chance to 1. select the final part values and 2. get to see if the circuit fits your needs
It is impossible to see what is wrong with these pictures... Get a breadboard and try this again. It will eventually work.